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Silence falls
And it's you and me once again
It's my tactic-
To turn my back

I'm disgusted by your possession over me
What if I want out?
I don't argue
You'll win anyway

So material rules again
Reality, claim my bones!
I am the mildly suicidal-
Too attached to my hatred to die

They say it doesn't matter
That it's all in my heart
Perhaps that's their survival technique
Yet, am I alone in this struggle?

I wish I was only gay
That would solve my case
I don't know myself well enough to say
That perhaps it's something deeper

Today, I woke up in the wrong body
I don't know what else to say
This is my technique
I am the mildly suicidal
Something fresh off the slate.

Tell me what you think.
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StrangeCanine Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I really love this. It speaks to me alot (even though that sounds cheesy XD) it just does. Its written amazingly! I understand how you feel.
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MasterSynthetica Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Student Photographer
I'm so glad. Honestly, when I wrote it...I wasn't sure if anyone would really understand my obscurity. I'm really happy it got such positive feedback.
Thank yu so much :hug:
Good luck!
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StrangeCanine Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Thank you good luck to you too! :) And its no problem <3
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Damian-The-Demon Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I may be a bit more than mildly suicidal, but I really like this.

Knowing you're living in the wrong body sucks, for sure...
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:iconmastersynthetica:
MasterSynthetica Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student Photographer
I think knowing is the hardest part, unfortunately :/
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Damian-The-Demon Featured By Owner Aug 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah. Everything just feels so wrong after you've found out.
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Verloren-Vestand Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Like +++
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:iconmastersynthetica:
MasterSynthetica Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student Photographer
:hug:
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Verloren-Vestand Featured By Owner Aug 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
=)
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WordOfChen Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Professional Writer
Hi there, your work has been featured here: [link]

As a part of our Lit Love. feature ^^

-Co-captain Hayes :iconlugialuvr13:
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MasterSynthetica Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student Photographer
Of course! Thanks for letting me know.
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revejump97 Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student Photographer
sad, beautiful, relatable,
it is perfect
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MasterSynthetica Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank yu. I'm sorry yu can relate :P but thanks :3
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DeadSkarlett Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012
Good work :) <3
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:iconmastersynthetica:
MasterSynthetica Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank yu ^^
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DeadSkarlett Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012
welcome
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Kumoko-Tei Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
This is really relevant to me. Thank you for writing this.
You're cool.
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MasterSynthetica Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student Photographer
I'm so glad. It's so inspiring to know when my writing can be relevant to someone.
Thank yu so much.
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dajhdjKHJHAJ Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
so sad and beatiuful!
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MasterSynthetica Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student Photographer
Thankk Yu :3
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dajhdjKHJHAJ Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2012  Student Traditional Artist
you're welcome :D
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